The Revenge

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The Revenge 〰️

5-6 mins for whole chapter 1 : 3 scenes

<Camera movement pace picks up a little as we enter this act>

The safety

<Sun is setting as we go to this scene>

Scranton, Pennsylvania . Sara pulls to Paul’s drive way . She takes a moment to breath in seat. She looks at the children’s mirror. Angelina was sleeping in her car seat. She looks at the side mirror , She could see the two cars behind her car were just there. David provided few shadow security for her in case someone tries to attack her on the way. She takes another heavy breath like she used at her labor room while delivering Angelina. Closed her eyes for a second as if she is gathering herself from the overwhelming information she heard from Declan.

The conversation flashed back in her head, her eyes are still closed,

“I killed 40 innocent lives in my last mission, I missed the target by a fraction of a degree” she hears Declan’s voice

Her eyes still closed. In her head Declan continues. <Screen play note, no flash back closeup on Sara’s face, her expressions and Declan’s offscreen Voice Over>. Sara’s face goes from concerned to angry and mixture of such emotions as the VO progresses <We want Sara’s character , emotions to register with the audience>, <During VO go between wide angle of the car and Sara’s face closeup, also one couple of seconds shot of Sara’s face reaction at her house background standing and looking at Declan who must be offscreen. Camera goes from bottom angle face closeup right to left>

Declan continues to explain “What I didn’t know was there was a male survivor He is here , he tried to grab Angie, I chased him.”

<back to Sara’s head and VO>

Declan continues

“Please stay with Paul for sometime . Give me a week to eliminate this threat, David agreed to help us”

Meanwhile, Declan is at home on a sofa, still staring at wall while thinking about what Sara mentioned.

In flashback, She is determined and firm off screen

“You better sort out. I am a mom first and then your wife. I will leave you if I have to, if that protects Angie” She turns over and walks away <Only sound effects offscreen>

<Cut back to Paul’s front porch>

Paul and his friends assembler out side of car <Shoot from Passenger seat><Crane/Drone goes from that shot to top angle moving away from the house and goes down the small jungle outside of Paul’s house>

Near Paul’s house Someone was watching Sara and Angie going in with Janet Paul and friends from near by tree.

Paul and friends surround the house with shotguns. It was a pleasant evening and sun was setting. Angie was enjoying the swing on the tree.

The man watches the security detail disappear into the house.

Meanwhile , Declan is at his house preparing to go face to face with the enemy he made seven years ago. First this is first he has to be calm and make sensible decisions. His mind is over burdened with a lot of thoughts. He decides to mediate before the big journey. As he madidates he senses someone at the second floor. he did not expect an opportunity to test his skills this soon., His gun is locked away as suggested by the therapists. Sara has the codes.

He slowly moves to kitchen counter to pickup the cutting knife. The foot steps come closer. May be 3 or 4. He sits, swivels 180 and cuts the legs of those two folks. He observed that they are not carrying guns. He is sure they won’t hurt him. As they fall on the floor with a scream, he gets up quickly, takes one guys hand , joins with other guys hand and pull both of their hands in an awkward angle and thus breaks them.

Four more guys approach from all directions slowly. Declan does sort of enter the dragon move with all four of them. They follow Declan’s slow moves. After couple of such steps One guy goes low, one guy come to his body, one guy dragon jumps and one guy goes behind. Declan tries to avoid them, But they are well trained and had a good plant to capture him. They were not trying to hurt him. Declan stops trying. he thinks may be his enemy beat him to finding. <If needed for screen, extend the action>

He surrenders himself, at the same time makes sure to make them think that he is hesitant to go down

The man watching Paul’s house is coming down the tree <Drone shot. Show the watcher’s foot at closeup, not face>

----------- CONTINUES IN CHAPTER 23

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